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PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 5:20 am 
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Hi. Heres part 1 of my new fan-fic. This is based off of the Paramount movie, with things from the old book tossed in.


Chapter 1

The story of Scott part 1

Looks like rain




He was young. In his upper teens perhaps. It was around 6:00 pm in his high rise in Chicago. He was preparing to meet his friend at the docks. "See ya mom". The last words he would ever say in his home.

He was about half way there, it was 6:12 pm. The sky groow dark.


Across town was his best friend. He was a military buff and loved history. He left his home to meet his friend at the docks.

They met at 6:32. The wind began to blow. "Hey Scott" his friend said to him. They sat and talked.

"So did you get that vintage World War II Rocket launcher?" Scott asked his friend. "Yeah i got it today. They say it stopped working back before the end of the war, but a few hours working on it and now it should fire like the day it was made. Now all i need are some vintage World War II rockets"

They laughed.

6:40 PM

The sky now looked vary bad. The friends decided to head back to Scott's. And then the strikes.

"Woah" Said Scott in amazement as lighting struck over and over near the Sears Tower.

It was over by 6:45.

"Maybe we should call home" Said Scott. His cell would not work.

Bang

Bang

Bang

The ground shook. By now the boys where vary near the tower. The ground clapsed in.

Then they herd a sound

"A-LOOOOOO"

A huge thing began the rise form the ground. It stood on three legs and had a huge head with a shape like a rain drop. The thing lifted 2 tentacle looking things.

Fwoosh

The people around Scott and his friend began to burst. Scott and his friend began to run towards Scott's, but they stopped when they saw it crumble. They began running towards the docks.

"A-LOOOOOOO"

Another of these machines rose from the ground.

They hid. Silence. "Do you think its over?" Asked Scott's friend. Just then a shirt landed near them. They peaked from there hiding spot. Clothes rained from the sky. Then Scott's friend, a joker even in awful times says "i thought it looked like rain".


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Cool, keep it up, but I think it should be posted in the miscellaneous section... of course it's up to you to place it. I don't care actually.


(So why do I mention that, anyway? #-o ](*,) ](*,) ](*,) )


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Thanks. I posted it here cuz its based on the Paramount movie.


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Okay. I like it anyway. :D


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Chapter 2

The story of Scott

Part 2

wreckage






7:30 PM


Chicago is now in ruins after the attack.





"Its been quite for awhile, do you want to see if its safe?" Asked Scott's friend. Scott was silent. "Come on, we shouldn't just wait here for them to find us, we should head somewhere safer, like maybe a shelter" The friend said. ".....lets see if we can find anything useful in the city first" Said Scott. "Okay, lets go" Said the friend.


7:45

"It looks like we may be the last people in the city" Said Scotts friend. "Lets go see if your building is still standing, maybe we can get something there. Didn't you get some vantage World War II guns working?" Asked Scott. "Yeah, lets go"


8:17


"Here we go" Said scotts friend. He handed him two old pistols. "I'll take these" Scotts friend took his Rocket launcher and a pistol.


8:30

After getting some food water and weapons they left the building.









That night a storm was seen near London.


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Keep going, neoendgame, you're doing a good job! :D


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Thanks. The next chapter should be up soon. And it will have a suprise


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I'm looking forward to that... :D


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Chapter 3

The story of the Battle Ship





7:00 AM


The storm had just happened.

A-LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

A tripod rose from the ground near a Royal Navy yard.

People began to die vary fast. It was about then a single ship was seen. It was an Arleigh Burke Class destroyer. The Thunder Child.

The ship raced to the shore and began to fire its rockets. 4 strikes. 1 made it past the shield. The tripod fell to the ground, but it was not destroyed. Just then a second Tripod rose from the water. It hit the thunder Child with its heat ray. The ship did not give up. It blasted the tripod that had fallen.

UUUUUULLLAAAAAAAAAAAA

It was destroyed.

The ship turned to the other tripod. The ship sped past it, so it could lead the tripod away from London.

The ship launched 4 more rockets, hitting the tripod with 1 of the rockets. this time the tripod get a shot off before it fell. The Ship was now burning, but it was still moving. It destroyed the second tripod.

The ship headed back to the dock.

AAALOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

AAAAALLLOOOOOOOOOOOOO

AAAAALLLOOOOOOOOOOOOO

AAAAALLLOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Four tripods where waiting for it.

The ship blasted away with missiles and bullets, and three tripods where destroyed. The other tripod hit the ship, and the ship burned more. The Thunder Child fired away, and the fourth tripod was destroyed.

AAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

A huge thing was seen in the sky. It was a new fighting machine, and it shot off a huge heat ray.

The Thunder Child was destroyed.

The flying machine flew over London firing its heat ray.

London was in flames.


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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arleigh_Bu ... _destroyer


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AWESOME BATTLE SCENE! Make more of them! :D =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>


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Thanks.



Chapter 4


The story of Scott part 3




Scott and his friend have been trying to make there way to Columbus Ohio, where Scott has relatives.

"So how much farther do you think we need to go?" Asked Scott's friend. "Probably about 2 more days on foot, but if we found a working car we may be able to make it in about 2 hours" Said Scott. "It looks like those things haven't came here yet" Said the friend. "Well lets not assume that they haven't. I haven't seen any other people around" Said Scott.


"GET IN" yelled a man in a bus. The boys got in. "Who are you?" Asked Scott's friend. "Im a Rifleman. The tripods destroyed my unit. Do you guys have any place to stay? I found an abandoned house" Said the Rifleman.


At the house


"Here have some water" He said to the boys. He gave them each a bottle of water. "Whats your plan here?" Asked Scott. "Im headed to New York. After that i want to head tord the Subways and sewers. I want to gather the strongest and smartest people i can. We can make a new world underground" said the Rifleman.

"What? Why cant we just fight them? this area looks untouched" Said Scott's friend.

"I think they are still just preparing. Soon they may start keeping us alive. Maybe they will use us as entertainment. After we gather an army maybe we can attack one of there tripods. We can take it and burn them. We can reduce them to ash. We can take this world. And i will be the king....i will take this earth from the aliens and make my own army of tripods" Said the man.

"You want to take over the world? What will you do if people wont follow you?" Asked Scott.

"They will die" He said.

"No...i wont have any part of this" Said Scott. His friend agreed.

"I wont let you go" Said the man. "I need help to start my army" The man pointed a gun at them.


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That rifleman is getting gross now... what will happen to him?


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....i think you miss understood whats going on.


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I was kidding, but still anxious about what will happen next... :D


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Chapter 5

The story of Scott part 4





"Please...why do you need us" Asked Scott. "I want you to be my first sholdiers. We take any people we find. The strong and smart must join us. The weak and dumb must die" The rifleman said.

"Scott, keep talking" the friend wisperd.

Scott kept talking to the man about his plans.After a few minutes Scotts friend began to slowly slip away from the two of them.

BAM

Scotts friend hit the man with his Rocket launcher. The man was out cold.


They left the house of this insane man. They continued there trek to Columbus Ohio.

2 days later.


The boys wake hiding under a freeway.

"Well it looks like its time to go. We should be there vary soon. We can go to my grandparents house. I think you will get along with my grandfather, he collects World War II stuff" Said Scott.


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Cool! Keep it up, neoendgame, I like this story. :D


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AFTER 2 YEARS THE STORY LIIIIIVES


Chapter 6

The story of Scott part 5

9:30 am



The Tripods continue there attack on humanity.

Scott and his friend arrive in Columbus Ohio, and find Scott's grandparents house.


"GRANDPA" yelled scott, at the sight of his Grandfather. "SCOTT" yelled his grandfather in replay.


10:00 am

Scott has just finished telling his grandfather the tale of there trek to ohio.


"I don't know what help i can be, but i can give you food and water, but you should not stay here long" said Scott's grandfather

"What about these?" Asks Scott's friend, holding a rocket. "That old thing?" asked the grandfather. "I think they may fit this" Said Scott's friend as he takes the Rocket Launcher from its case.

The grandfather laughed, and gave them a case of rockets. They said there goodbyes, and left the house.



Nearby a Tripod advanced through the city.

ALLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOO.


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Oh boy! I'm curious to see how it ends.


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Chapter 7

The great battle of Japan part 1



In all the world there had not been solders of such power as the SHS's of Japan. These warriors had given Japan the upper hand during the "Battle of the Chinese Rivers" in 2012, and now they had a greater challenge to face.


Japan has long been famous for there monster movies such as "Godzilla", and now they face a terror that could topple Sky Scrapers and fight of the great Imperial army.



The first Tripod attack left most of Tokyo in ruins.



The battle was about to begin.

The Tripods moved forward.

The SHS Soldiers prepared to fight.


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Keep it up. I'm curious to see how Japan will make his stand...


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Blimey :a103: after two years I thought this thread was dead.
Keep it coming neoendgame. =D>


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Chapter 8

Gone





The sun rose over the valley of travinz, and the rings were magnificent that day.


The homes now deserted, and the road ways silent.

Fifty metal monsters stood, looking over our valley.


Our weapons stood no chance against the might of the invaders.


The lava falls of norniin now alone, and the pits into the eye now deserted.


The Martians took our planet, but they wanted more.


Earth was in there sights.

Saturn had fallen.


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A nice twist to the story, visiting an old battle ground, off-Earth.
is travinz a name of your own invention or is it for real? on one of Saturn's Moons or something? I Googled it but nothing came up. either way I like the idea. =D> keep it up.


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I made it up, Thanks.



Chapter 9




The Great Battle of Japan part 2


The SHS soldiers fired rockets at the army of 100 tripods that where advancing into the city.

One tripod fell, as the others fired there heat rays, destroying 99 SHS Soldiers.


A siren was heard.

A huge flying machine was seen.

Black Smoke covered the area.

Rockets flew, the heat rays destroyed all of the SHS Soldiers, and 50 tripods fell.


Japan had been defeated.


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