Eve Of The War

Indeed it does which is why I'm not going to point out the grammar and punctuation errors in your last post
I shall correct my (it's to its) before I print them out, and thank you again for spotting it.
What a pleasant surprise!
Are you telling me Stan wasn't a popular character?! I thought long and hard about my decision to blast Stan, Someone had to get it and so it was going to be Stan or an also-ran, well the tossed coin came up heads so it had to be Stan.
And yes you were right about Sharon & Bobby , Sharon was blasting The Thunder Child just trying to protect her Bobby.
I think there's a lot of Roger & Jessica Rabbit in that pair.

Another good episode! And since this is Bob's account of the invasion, we know he wasn't killed. Just tell me that when he shows up again, you're not going to go the soap opera route and have him suffering amnesia. Since this is the Martian version of the invasion, you must be pretty near the end of the story now, and we wouldn't really have time for fooling around with that sort of thing.

I'll have to go back and check, but I think the title page originally said "A Martian's personal account" but as Bob has spent most of the time separated from the rest of the team there's no way he could know what they where doing. So in my printed-out version I have amended the title to "Taken from the Captain's log and the crew's personal diaries, this is the Martians version of THE INVASION OF EARTH? The true account of what took place in and around London during the Martians landing." catchy title hey? There will be no waking up in the shower like Bobby Ewing did in 'Dallas', that's if our Bobby wakes up at all.Oh there are a few more issues from Wells' original (although inaccurate account) that must be addressed and cleared up. But that's all you'll get from me for now

Can't wait for more.

Three pictures of the next twelve done already

Awesome. I'm working on Part 429 of my Sprite Movie now.

Mmmm... I dunno, lacks some detail. Maybe you should flesh it out a little more.


Wow, does that ever indicate one's age. (Assuming, of course, one gets that reference without looking it up. Like I did. Insert 'old man' emoticon here.)



Well, we'll just have to WAIT AND SEE then, won't we?
Um... that doesn't sound like it'll get you to work any faster, does it? I've got to work on my intimidation skills...

Oh um er, We Brits didn't get to see Dallas until many years had past since it's original showing over in the U.S.
Everyone was asking "Who shot J.R.?" and we were asking "Who the hell is this J.R.?"

Still got a fair bit of work to do before the next episode, I've got to invent a flying machine.

Cool! I wonder how that one looks like!

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Doing the bulge in the water was a lot harder than I thought it would be.

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Poor Sharon always seems to get most of whatever’s flying around, chunks of Kenny chunks of Bob’s last meal.

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It took me ages to design the flying machine almost 30 minutes.
Maggie was going to be called Betty but it wasn’t Scottish sounding enough for an engineer.

Uh oh, things aren't looking good here for Sharon...

And so the Earth's bacteria defenders strike their first blow against the Martians...

I like the flying machine, the design fits in very well with the walkers. And I'm now very intrigued at what has become of mayther, is it bacteria or something else?

I'm not going to tell you
So far I've been writing the scripts as and when I need them, episode to episode, but now I'm getting close to the end I'm going to write all of the remaining scripts down and work out how many more installments it will take to get to the end. so don't be surprised if you don't hear from me for a little while, I'm not ignoring you I'll just be busy.

Ok its been a whole day, the scripts done yet?


love the new update, that smoke from the flying machine is fantastic

looking forward to more, whenever they come.

Dito.

I just had to put the smoke in because Wells mentions it at the end of 'The Thunder Child' chapter.
But it will also lead to a revelation for Sharon and subsequently to another big disaster So nothing new then

When can we expect the next update of your comic?

I'm still working on the scripts, I haven't even started on the pictures for the next issue yet. So far I've written scripts for eight episodes, each episode will have twelve pictures. I think I'm going to have to write another three or four episodes to get right to the end of the story, so you can expect another eleven or twelve episodes before I'm done.

OK, I have written out the scripts right to the end and unless I make any changes, it should make twelve more episodes and here’s the first one.

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The Captain’s not looking her, best is she?

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It’s good to see old familiar faces, isn’t it?
Just when you thought it was safe to go back into the water.

Haha, great last line =D loving the updates Crow, but try as I might I cant picture how a scot would say 'Mayther' instead of mother, im an englishman myself but dont recall that way of saying it.

Look forward to the next 11 eps!